Tuesday, August 9, 2016

Persuasive writing

Persuasive writing for longer weekends!


Dear Frimley School teachers
Did you ever think weekends are too short?
I think we should have half an hour extra from Monday to Thursday at school, so that we can have Friday off?
I think we should have three days off over the weekends please!


Firstly,  we only have two days on the weekends and five weekdays.   I think it's a long wait for hardly anything.  We work so hard at school but we don't have any time to have fun on the weekend.


Secondly, our weekends just go so fast!  When weekends start, kids get so excited but only get 2 days (48 Hours)!  This is not enough time to relax and recover from our brain working so hard at school.  

Thirdly on the weekends, you can do anything but then you're back to school after only a short amount of time.  Over the weekends, your fun time gets extended and you get longer time with your family and friends.


We need longer weekends!!!!

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