Thursday, May 24, 2018

CRYPTO

Crypto
Author : Riley Burgiss
Dad, is that you
13/9/2020
“Lucas, here now.”  He starts running as the mortar bomb hits his old location.  “Thanks bro,” he says.
“We need to move back to base now!”
“Sir! Yes sir!”
“Let’s go!”  
We start retreating back to camp. Suddenly…
“MOVE, MOVE NOW LOGAN!” a voice hollers.  
We start running and I see something - IT WAS MY DAD.  
“I saw Barry.”
“What one, wait... Dad?”  Lucas asks.
“Yeah,” I reply.
“Isn’t he dead?”
“Yeah. I mean like a hallucination. But you know what just, just shut up and stop talking about him please,” I say as I start welling up with tears.

The backstory
20/5/2013
It was a dark night when we were out on my 25th birthday.  I got a new car and to be exact it was a dodge, challenger, SRT8.  It was wrapped black with double white stripes. I was out with my mum, dad, brother and my dog Jack.  We were crossing the border back to North America. While crossing the border there was an attack. We got stuck in line and then, my parents were shot.  We just made it out and waited until the next day.

21/5/2013
It was the day after the attack and we tried crossing the border again which this time was a success.  Soon after we found a sign that read accepting new recruits, U.S military in need. We decided to join so we could avenge our parents by taking down the Federation and killing Rico.

Boot camp
27/7/2013
We had the last of our records checked and then we were off to boot camp.  It was boring and really struggle heavy in the first few hours but we soon found some things to do in our spare time.  We would carve logs or sticks into weapons and then shank the training dummies. For our warm up we had to do 6 km runs around the meadow.  The trainers would pick on John a lot because he would cut corners on the runs and would prank the trainers extremely often.

U.S soldier
16/3/2014
Boot camp ended a week ago and we were now official soldiers.  Big boots, heavy duty vests and huge guns. Lucas and I were soldiers out on the battlefield with submachine guns.  I was extremely nervous out on the battlefield seeing millions of dead bodies around me with brains, blood and other organs flowing out.  I retreated out to the barracks and then accidentally shot Lucas in the left leg. I thought he was an enemy but then he started screaming.  I couldn’t tell him, I just didn't have the guts. I started crying and then Lucas came over limping and told me he was shot. I helped him back to the hospital and then we had been sent on in quarter of an hour.  Back of to the barracks is where we were going but then a stealth chopper came and collected us. We started screaming at them until one of the guys took his mask off and said, “You’re a Crypto now.”

Crypto life
16/3/2014
You’re a Crypto now,” said the guy.
At this point we were still screaming but then he told us that the federation were planning to take over the world.  We already knew this but we still asked questions about it. He told me a quote that I’ll never forget, Life as a U.S soldier is hard but life as Crypto is even harder.  We’d be flying planes and helicopters as suppliers for the beginning but soon it would be out on the battlefield with all guns blazing. He even told us that we would soon be infiltrating enemy camps, warehouses and bases.

Nukes!!
14/9/2020
“Logan, logan,” Lucas screams.
My breath was taken and I didn't reply with what he was holding.
He shouts again, “It is my new headset that is just like the old one but with 60x zoom and night vision but now it also has, (takes deep breath) heat vision for smoke bombs.”
“When did this arrive,” I ask.
Than he responds, “Today it just got dropped off from the factory.”
Then the commander came and it was a long talk, “The federation had just started attacking panama leading out to the U.S.A and the fed are also setting off North Korea's nuke supply and where do you think huh, take a guess oh wait gotta be here because earth is taken over by the fed and America are the only ones left, you guys need to go out there with your dog Jack, Ben Jackson and Hesh Leaoki”  Finally we get to talk and all that is said is, “Ok, Ok.”

North Korea
15/9/2020
“Lucas you take out top left, Logan you take out the left guard buy the entrance, I’ll take out the right one and Hesh, top right guard.  On three 1, 2, 3.” Said Ben
North Korea sucks, it’s just snow everywhere,”  I said
“Shush, now we need to move those bodies by the entrance,” said Ben, “Then jack the next vehicle so we can enter.”
We begin dragging the bodies into the guards office as some guys try exiting.  Luckily they didn't see us so we ran back out with bright red faces and … “People exiting, positions, gyeognabgo-e taewoda jullae?” (Korean for “Could you give us a ride to the hangar”)  “mwoya, geuge haeg gyeognabgo ya?”  (Korean for “What one, is it the nuke hangar?”)
“Just give the damn car.”  Screams Hesh as we all shoot them.
“Stick to the plan guys, all we need to do is hack the nukes launch code and then get back the car to leave otherwise if it doesn’t work we you guys protect me while I hack it then we fight it out, got it,” explains Ben.
“Ok just drive, go,” says Hesh as I step down on the pedal.


16/9/2020
The sun raced up as fast as a f1 race car on a straight.  It was really bright outdoors but our breaths still made huge smoke trails.  The snow was terrible because we first of all didn't have the time to get snow tires and we didn't have a roof on the jeep so the snow was everywhere. Once we entered we began driving to the drop off point.
“This is gonna be a long drive,” says Lucas, “Are we nearly at the drop off.”
“Shush, one false move and we are dead.”
We carried on driving and there it was, the drop off point.  We got out and grabbed the duffle bags from the back. Walking into the vault like door there it was the security check.  The dog's started barking.
“Pick up the pace guys,” I command.
Jogging down the stairs to the room all the scientists were working so we pulled the machine gun out and they were fleeing like pigs that were about to become bacon.
“Move now, they’ll have backup on us already coming,” says ben.
“Unload the equipment onto the command table while I, get the guns out now there coming.” Says Ben
“I’ll get sticky bombs.”  Yells Lucas but the gunfire blocks out his voice.
It was a long wait for the virus to be uploaded and ready for use.
Around 5 minutes later we had the virus uploaded and we were off.
“Get your night vision on because lights are out.”  Says Ben as I knock out the lights.
“We got the virus up and on sir and leaving the drop off now,”  Says ben to the sergeant.
We exited the base and suddenly the sky turned black.
“Stand down!” yells one of the guards as they begin shooting us.
“Shoot, Hesh now, SHOOT.”  Screams Ben.
I end up in driver again and end up escaping the jeeps but then some other vehicles came.  They had snowmobiles chasing us down like dogs herding sheep back to their paddock.
We made it to the pick up point where we were supposed to be picked up and oh my god.
“Get to the sub.”  Screamed commander Bill.
We all hop in as the sub crushes the front of the ice land into a thin layer of water.
“Sir we have gathered intell on the fed's plans, their next attack is on South America.”  Says Ben.
“Then we need all we got, get in contact with everyone and tell them to prepare,” Commander Bill explains.
“Even the final carrier,” asks Hesh.
Then Bill replies, “It’s all or nothing.”

This is war
19/9/2020
“Max get the guns, were sinking this ship,” I yell.
“Shoot now, we got this,” screams Max.
The sky was dark just like it had been for the past few days.  Dark sky, foggy seas, we could barely see the other ships. It was like a horror movie or a fiction story.  It was only the second day of the fight and we were clearly losing, air supports down, escape boats blown and damaged engines.  Then all of a sudden…
“WE SUNK RICO’S SHIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”  Screamed some guy manning the machine guns. We somehow started the ship back up and moved closer to shoot him.  The sky started clearing but however there was still a lot of lightning. The oceans were covered with blood and scrap but it was over, the war had ended.  Years of fighting, over.

Crypto day
21/9/2020

It was the 21st of september and it was also now known as Crypto day.  The day where all the soldiers who went to war are now remembered. We had a whole new anthem and many things such as movies, books, tv shows and many more all about us.  It felt good to be the centre of the focus and the main everything.

Learning steps

Name : Riley
My next steps in writing are…
  • Use of complex punctuation such as semicolons and parentheses
  • Even out the speech in my writing so it is not over done
  • Don’t over do adjectives to make it more boring
  • Making my stories less boring by only using sentences I need
My next steps in reading are…
  • Being able to identify all writers styles throughout their stories
  • Fully understand the meaning of the story I am reading
  • Use all of my steps from reading to my writing
My next steps in math is…
  • Better strategies so I can complete questions faster
  • My 13 times tables and up off by heart




Term 3 goals
Typing away and then, “Hey Jaqob.”  Yeah that’s me so in term 3 I am going to stop talking and mucking around in class.
I will always stick at what I’m doing next term and will show grit by not giving up on stuff especially like math.
In term 3 I hope to make it better than any other term at school so far.

I am going to do all of the above in term 3 and make it the BEST!!

Grit

Grit
Step by step, breath by breath, the walk.  The long walk left many with aching legs and destroyed ankles but I, Riley Burgiss, had something else.  I too had aching legs and busted ankles but another thing had hit me … I was literally breathless, no breath at all.  It was a real struggle climbing the hill but in the end I, and many others, had conquered the almighty Ruahine Range and reached Sunrise hut.